Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

concurrent world, it is an undeniable fact that

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number of

supermarkets

are improved day by day and

also

their development increases Vastly.

Therefore

, in

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nations numerous small and local

work

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are not able to engage in the market.

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number of

people

believe that

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of local businesses it will be destroyed native society. I completely disagree with

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statement which will be discussed in

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with their appropriate examples. To embark with, several rational

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this

and leading one for

this

is provincial field is necessary for all countries and it is

also

helpful for our economy and create a safe community because many small

field

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are

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attracted with

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so local

markets

are a major part of GDP.

In other words

, a plethora of factories

depends

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on small employment because factories rely on to sell their products

thus

without

these small business

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. Many factories are forced to close because of

supermarkets

and lots of

people

are

lost

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their jobs in

this

development.

Moreover

,

people

are mostly preferred to buy

things

from local

markets

because every essential

items

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are available

in

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there and society can buy them

in

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price rather than

supermarket

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the supermarket

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.

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,

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suggest

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that 80% of

community

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the community

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are rely

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on small or local businesses.

However

,

people

seldom give a thought to ponder over the other side of

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that is

super

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supermarkets

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markets

are not available in

countryside

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the countryside

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due to the fact

this

super market

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are only build

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in city areas

consequently

community who live in

countryside

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the countryside

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are mostly

depended

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on of limited

markets

because without regional

markets

their life

is become

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harder.

Moreover

, in numerous

supermarkets

things

are sold in

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range of prices which can not affordable for every person and these

things

are very expensive compare to the local

markets

.

For instance

,

supermarkets

are included their extra 10% tax for every

items

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so prices of all the

things

are automatically increased rather than provincial businesses. In conclusion, the seemingly inexorable debate about the regional or small field can keep on going.

Nevertheless

, showing the deep reverence about all the

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and observing finer nuance for all matter mentioned . I espouse to

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for supporting paltry

supermarkets

are very important, and we have

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support

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them.