Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates a comparison of expenditure on different forms of entertainment during a five years period. The comparison was generalised in 3 regions which consist of Asia, Europe and the United States. The concerned categories include Cinema, Video, Music, Publishing and Television.
To begin
with, the highest participation rate of all regions fell to Television type which rose up from 1995 to 2000. Meanwhile, the publishing category received a high amount of interest that relatively increased over five years period as well. Music was considered to be less concerned of all regions. However
, it is interesting to see that, interest in music significantly increase in Asia while other parts of the world remained in similar contribution. Thus
, in the Video aspect, there was a continued lowered number of people especially in Europe during 1995. Consecutively, The type that gained the least participation was Cinema with the lowest number of participants.Submitted by petchlada.yaovapak on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite