There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making temperature higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising ?

It is inevitable that global warming is the burning issue of the day. There are many signs through which one can undoubtedly observe the grievous

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in the climate.

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there are several reasons behind

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most of them are directly or indirectly instigated by

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activities

. The different causes will be briefly discussed in the essay.

To begin

with, the

Earth

is getting hotter on an unprecedented scale. There are several gases present in

Earth

's atmosphere which causes the increment in

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temperature

. The emission of carbon

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di

oxide gas is one of the key factors in

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. CO2 gas is emitted by numerous vehicles and factories,

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to

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thickness of the ozone layer.

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harmful rays like UV rays fall directly on

Earth

's surface and eventually heat the planet.

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, due to

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in population, people are cutting innumerable forests to get homes and factories. The

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do not think about the

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adverse

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trees and plants,

consequently

, there is a massive decrement has been seen in oxygen. Oxygen is a fundamental gas to lower down the rise in

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temperature

but in the absence of

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global

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warming

. In conclusion, there are extreme climate change

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occurs

nowadays,

this

will detriment the atmosphere gradually. The people should understand their responsibilities and act wisely in

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of saving our

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environment

and lives. If it is not done,

then

the future of our new generation

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Earth

will be in danger.