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International travel makes people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures should be taken to solve these problems?

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Travelling, in
this
 contemporary era, has become a passion among commoners;
however
, travelling to foreign countries has made
people
 biased
instead
 of open-minded.
This
 essay will discuss
about
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the reasons behind
this
 assertion and remedial measures will be explicated
further
. Commencing with pre-eminent causes of showing discrimination for travelling abroad. The former viable anatomy is, racism is shown by locals towards travellers. When
tourists
 visit
to
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foreign lands and they try
to
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not only to interact with new
people
,
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 but
also
 know about the new culture, sometimes native dwellers show
critism
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criticism
 on the basis of skin colour and appearance.
For instance
, many African
people
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criticised
critised
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 because of their dark skin in European nations. As s result, they feel discriminated
and
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 biased towards Europeans.
Furthermore
,
crime
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 rate has significantly increased towards travellers as localities try to steal, misbehave and
sometime
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 rape cases has been recorded.
Hence
, it would deteriorate the respect of that country across the globe. In spite of having these impediments behind it, these hurdles can be resolved by taking appropriate actions. Awareness about
the
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healthy tourist relationships can be bestowed
amongs
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among
amongst
 commoners.
In other words
, imparting edification among
people
 by campaigns to develop a friendly behaviour with
tourists
, which will improve
country's
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 reputation globally . If foreigners are welcomed with a smile, it will increase
the
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tourism, which
boost
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 the economy of the nation. To exemplify, in Indonesia,
people
 show warm welcome towards
tourists
, which generate livelihood of many commoners by tourism. Another solution is, imposing strict regulations and
penalty
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 if locals are caught treated badly with
tourists
; In conclusion, albeit there are few grounds of
hinderance
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hindrance
 behind
this
 in the form of racism and crime rate,
this
 hurdle can be terminated by imposing strict actions by the
governement
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government
 and
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 awareness through campaigns in the communities.
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