Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is very important for every individual to play

sport

as it has the bulk of advantages but there are some

sports

like

sky

diving and skiing which could be very unsafe for any person. I completely disagree with the statement that it is very dangerous to play

such

sport

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and should be banned.

Firstly

,

Sky

diving and skiing are

also

sport

and lots of people play these

sports

. I have a question : How are these games risky? The environment in which skiing is done is prepared in a way that it should not injure any player.

Similarly

,

sky

diving is done with

lot

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of precautions.

Moreover

, they provide us with trainers when in need. To illustrate, I too once got fascinated by

this

game and so I too did

sky

diving.While I was nervous ,the way the trainer has consoled me was exceptional.So, I think it

not

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extreme

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an extreme

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sport

and need not

to

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be banned.

Secondly

, These types of

sport

help in exploring a person and they too help to overcome fears. A survey of a magazine says the human mind explore about 20 per cent after playing these kinds of

sports

.

For instance

, My one friend was having a phobia of heights. In order to overcome

his

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this

fear

, his father took him

to

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sky

diving and he was shivering there but with the help of

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the instructor

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instructor

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he was able to do it perfectly which help him in overcoming his

fear

. If he would not have done

sky

diving,he never would have overcome

this

fear

and after

that

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he was ready to fight his every

fear

. So,

this

sport

only

given

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him

that

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confidence that if he can do it, so he can do everything. To conclude, I would say it is necessary to play these games as these games help us in overcoming our weakness, as well as these

these

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sports

,

sports

are played under the supervision of trainers.So, they are not at all dangerous.