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Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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evolution
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 of technology, there is
inevitable
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 hammering of advertisements on television, radio, and roadside hoardings. Indubitably, it is the most persuasive tool of marketing
hence
 has become an indispensable part of human life. In my perspective, it is beneficial for society by virtue of not only providing information about new
products
 launched in the market but
also
 dispersing social
message
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messages
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 effectively. To embark with, adverts assist manufacturing concerns and consumers by giving them information about new
products
 and services launched in the market or recent innovation in existing
products
. If
advertisement
 houses do not promote goods, it would be impossible for the brands to sell their
products
.
In addition
to
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apply
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it
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apply
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,
advertisement
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the advertisement
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 industry is boosting
economy
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the economy
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 by generating jobs on
large-scale
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a large-scale
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 for thousands of individuals. With respect to
this
, it has become the backbone of many economies of the world. An exemplification of
this
 could be, as per an article published by ‘The Times’, an efficacious
advertisement
 has 95% chances to materialize the product into sales.
Besides
this
, it is pertinent to mention here that it is an effective tool by which social issues can be tackled. Since,
advertisement
 usually features famous celebrities, figureheads, the people
who
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whom
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general
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the general
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 public admires and when these prominent personalities touch any social issue, it has more convincing power. Amitabh Bachhan tells
public
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the public
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 to bring their children for pulse polio immunization is an epitome of it.
Therefore
, advertisements are very informative in nature and
has
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 many positive attributes rather than
deteriorating
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a deteriorating
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 effect. To recapitulate, having discussed a great deal of deliberation, it is incisively clear that marketing through print media, audio-visual means has tremendous merits, as they are a source of information about commodities as well as social
message
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messages
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.
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