Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in the cities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, individual think that they will have a healthy

lifestyle

by living in the

village

, while other claims that

cities

residents have a healthy

lifestyle

. Personally, I believe that the

cities

have more

disadvantage

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than those who staying in outside of the

cities

.

However

, In

this

essay

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I will

be discuss

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of

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both views and

then

I will about my option in the conclusion.

First

and foremost, it is commonly known that life in the

village

are

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such

quite distinction with the

citiy

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city

residents´s

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lifestyle

. Generally, in the

village

people usually own a garden whereas the fruits and

vegetable

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vegetables

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are plants.

Moreover

, they are much more

activie

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active

, compare to the

city-people

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city people

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. To illustrate that there is some

proven

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that

village

people have to use their body

strenght

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strength

from morning to night,

by

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my

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work in

garden

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the garden

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and bring food for their family. It is

clearly

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that they live a life with natural

activies

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activities

and have mostly organic foodstuff.

On the other hand

, there are some people who think that those who live in the

cities

, will have

better

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lifestyle

. In fact, the

cities

resident

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residents

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have more options,

such

as

acessing

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accessing

in

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to

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healthcare, gym membership.

In addition

, for mind relaxing, they have opportunities to

go to

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coffee

shop

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such

as Starbuck and Costa. In

In

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conclusion,

although

urban areas facilitate residents with prestigious health benefits and wellbeing facilities, I believe that villagers are wealthy with more natural health assistance to spend a healthy

lifestyle

easier.