Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

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Advertisements

have blended into multiple aspects of our lives over the

last

few decades. From TV

advertisments

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Advertisements

rally us into buying unnecessary

products

? Or, Do they provide us with options and new trends to improve our life?

Advertisements

provide a window into the trends and new technologies that are constantly evolving to suit and aid in everyday activities. They

also

portray a path to better the existing lifestyle, object or just a way of doing simpler things.

This

enables the consumer to understand what is available and enhance the quality of life.

For example

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robotic

vaccuming

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vacuuming

machine against a basic

vaccum

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vacuum

cleaner is

huge

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a huge

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change that could positively impact your lifestyle. Despite the best intentions of Advertising, the implications of a well placed

adveristment

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driving

consumer

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consumers

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to buy unnecessary

products

cannot be ruled out. In brief, some of the

Advertisements

cause

the

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people to replace a product with a new one before the end of its lifespan or the full extent of its usage. The offers and

season ending

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sales compound

this

situation; creating more waste and more new

products

For Instance

, an advertisement on a kitchen

knief

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knife

would direct the audience to think twice about

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sharpening an existing knifes against buying a brand new knife. The peer pressure of keeping up with the latest models on Technological

products

like Mobile

Phone

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phones

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, Television etc is

also

a crucial piece to

this

puzzle.

Advertisments

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Advertisements

that show a

neighour

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neighbour

with an old car versus a new car encourages

such

inherent human

behavior

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behaviour

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Nevertheless

Advertisments

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Advertisements

are a part of the culture and daily lives and the people would have to determine how it impacts them. It leads me to believe that more percentage of people are cajoled into purchasing

products

that they will be able to live without because of

Advertisements

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3Word repetition
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19Grammar mistakes
 

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Fully explain your ideas

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