Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people. What is the cause of the problem? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At present, there
are
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great
number of humans whose economical status is worse because of not having a job that pays and Change the article
a great
the great
as a result
they can not afford a home.So, many suggest that the nation
rulers must look after them. I agree with the statement only to a certain extent.Because it is true that they do not have enough opportunities due to multiple reasons Replace the word
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such
as no education, higer
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higher
people
but there are persons who misuse this
facility and tend to not work at all.
To begin
with, the major reason for citizens being unemployed is less or no education. Firstly
, this
might be due to their families poor financial status. Secondly
, they might drop out from their classes owning
to the fact that they are not interested in them. Correct your spelling
owing
However
, though they have no impact of this
at younger
age, it Add an article
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later
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For instance
, a friend of mine had dropped out from
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of
the
college as he could not pay for it. Though he did not face any problems with it Correct article usage
apply
initially
as he aged there was no one that could spare him a duty. Thus
, decisions
we make will definitely have Correct article usage
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it's
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effect
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On the other hand
, there are a plethora of chances that government's
policy could be wrongly used. Primarily, the youth can think of Correct article usage
the government's
this
policy as an excuse for them for not studying. Therafter
, it could inspire many working Correct your spelling
Thereafter
people
as well to quit their existing jobs. For example
, a junior from my college got facinated
by it and has stopped studying with a presumption that the ruler would provide him with all the facilities. So, Correct your spelling
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the mindset
a mindset
people
plays a crucial role in making decisions.
In summary, many philosopher's suggest that the elderly and needy people
should be taken care by
the nation itself. Change preposition
of by
However
, they must consider all the options that are available for it to get exploited and plan accordingly
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