Some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people. What is the cause of the problem? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present, there

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number of humans whose economical status is worse because of not having a job that pays and

as a result

they can not afford a home.So, many suggest that the

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rulers must look after them. I agree with the statement only to a certain extent.Because it is true that they do not have enough opportunities due to multiple reasons

such

as no education,

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higher

age

people

but there are persons who misuse

this

facility and tend to not work at all.

To begin

with, the major reason for citizens being unemployed is less or no education.

Firstly

,

this

might be due to their families poor financial status.

Secondly

, they might drop out from their classes

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to the fact that they are not interested in them.

However

, though they have no impact of

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at

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age, it

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compounded and will have adverse consequences during

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time.

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, a friend of mine had dropped out

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college as he could not pay for it. Though he did not face any problems with it

initially

as he aged there was no one that could spare him a duty.

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,

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we make will definitely have

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effect

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on us.

On the other hand

, there are a plethora of chances that

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policy could be wrongly used. Primarily, the youth can think of

this

policy as an excuse for them for not studying.

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, it could inspire many working

people

as well to quit their existing jobs.

For example

, a junior from my college got

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fascinated

by it and has stopped studying with a presumption that the ruler would provide him with all the facilities. So,

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the mindset

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of

people

plays a crucial role in making decisions. In summary, many philosopher's suggest that the elderly and needy

people

should be taken care

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the nation itself.

However

, they must consider all the options that are available for it to get exploited and plan

accordingly

.