Many children today find it difficult to concentrate or pay attention at school. What could you think are the main causes? What are the possible solutions?

Nowadays, it is undeniable that many students are getting harder to stay

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on studying at

schools

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.

This

essay will examine the main causes why it is more difficult to concentrate and possible solutions

of

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this

problem

. The two main causes of

this

problem

are addicted

online

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games and spending too much time on

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a smartphone

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smartphone

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. In

this

era, there are a lot of online games luring children’s attention.

For example

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teenagers, sometimes they complete by using the ranking in gaming.

Therefore

,

instead

of

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attention to the class, some pupils are focusing on completing the games.

Moreover

, spending time on mobile devices all

days

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leads to

lose

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focus

on lessons.

For instance

, parents allow their kids to use mobile phones or laptops anywhere and anytime.

Consequently

, it would be for children to concentrate at schools because they found out that it is more enjoyable to surf the internet or chat with their friends on social media.

In other words

,

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generation of

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realized that other things are more interesting than studying. Some possible

solution

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solutions

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to

this

problem

are

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banned

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banning

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using

mobile

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a mobile

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phone

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phones

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during the classroom as well as encouraging them to do more physical

activities

.

Firstly

, teachers should keep students’

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phones

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while they are having lessons and allow them to use

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during the break only.

Second

, promoting more social or physical

activities

will help them improve their ability to concentrate

to

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the

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real life.

Moreover

, parents can

also

solve

this

issue by bringing their kids

participating

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more

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in more

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activities

which can strengthen their ability to

focus

. In conclusion, many children have a

problem

to

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focus

on studying.

However

, both parents and teachers are playing key roles to help them by restricted time on using smartphones and building more real

activities

.