In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

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at the age of 65 and over had influenza
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in the United Kingdom from years 1985 to 1995. Units are measured in
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of
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significant growth in 1991, there was little change in 1985. It can be seen that in 1985, numbers of cases rose from 40 in 1985 to 55 in 1987. In the following year, 1987,
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dipped slightly to below 50 after it rose significantly to reach a high of above 70 in 1991. It is evident that in 1991, there was a decrease to 60 in 1993 of
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slight increase by 5 cases in 1994, remained at the same point till 1995.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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