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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days,
that is
 a new vital system to solve a lot of global
climate
 change. Most of the common problems that are challenges all countries that issue related to environmental so, there are many solutions to save our planet. In my ,opinion technology will play a good role in preserving our
climate
 and reducing the changes in it.
First
 of all, I believe there are many reasons for aid to preserve our global with new technology. Even its programs run with artificial intelligence can search rapidly with
risk
 and dangerous effects on natural changes.
For example
, a lot of new devices can measure the
risk
 of sea rise for a shore
that is
 an alarm to facing that challenge. That’s way to new important way to know the
risk
 of natural disasters and can take faster action to solve
this
risk
.
Secondly
,
that is
 a lot of researchers centres to keep up with new machinery and development for a hazard that will affect
climate
 change.
In other words
, there are strong relations between environmentalists and computer science engineering to develop many assessments that are will alert them to knowing the problem.
For instance
, at Harvard University are a piece of scientists work in another field like computer engineering to develop much software with drones that are will reveal air pollution and changes in
climate
 quickly. In conclusion, advantages for technology and exploited in the saving our
climate
 it will be a more useful and easy way to know a hazard in a short time.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental problems
  • technology
  • solve
  • reduce
  • pollution levels
  • renewable energy sources
  • waste management systems
  • sufficient
  • human behavior
  • consumption patterns
  • collaboration
  • policy-making
  • essential
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