In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, there is a high expectative that different
kinf
of transportation will be driverless, Correct your spelling
kind
as a result
, most of people
will become just passengers. Add an article
the people
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technoloy
will bring plenty of Correct your spelling
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adavantages
for humans Correct your spelling
advantages
arund
the world, but it is important to look at the other face of the benefit.
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Firstly
, the person who is going to use the driverless car
could do another tasks
while he is driving. Replace the adjective
another task
other tasks
Aditionally
, the Correct your spelling
Additionally
car
will choose the best route to safe time. So that, when we are doing another activities
, we could focus Replace the adjective
another activity
other activities
in
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on
important
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the important
thing
of our life. Fix the agreement mistake
things
Although
when someome
is driving can feel some control over the machine, the feeling of freedom while we are travelling without Correct your spelling
someone
worring
about traffic and secure driving has no comparison. Correct your spelling
worrying
For instance
, this
transportation breaktrough
will help a busy business person or families while children are travelling with them to the school.
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breakthrough
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tests
showed
that there is a Change the verb form
shown
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risk of Correct your spelling
high
accidentaly
when the computer can not detect some obstacles, Correct your spelling
accidentally
accidental
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conditions
car
is not able to avoid a simple accident, the passegers
will face a high Correct your spelling
passengers
securuty
risk. Even though with current technological advances, generally something goes wrong inside Correct your spelling
security
computer
. For Add an article
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car testing
a women
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years
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unfortunates
car
, the accident would not have been happened
.
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happened
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sum up, saving time and travelling relax is important, but safety is most, so in my opinion with the correct Correct your spelling
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to travel
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driverless
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