In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there is a high expectative that different
kinf
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kind
of transportation will be driverless,
as a result
, most of
people
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the people
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will become just passengers.
This
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technology
will bring plenty of
adavantages
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advantages
for humans
arund
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around
the world, but it is important to look at the other face of the benefit.
Firstly
, the person who is going to use the driverless
car
could do
another tasks
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while he is driving.
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Additionally
, the
car
will choose the best route to safe time. So that, when we are doing
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, we could focus
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the important
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thing
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of our life.
Although
when
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someone
is driving can feel some control over the machine, the feeling of freedom while we are travelling without
worring
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worrying
about traffic and secure driving has no comparison.
For instance
,
this
transportation
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breakthrough
will help a busy business person or families while children are travelling with them to the school.
On the other hand
, most of the present,
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have
showed
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that there is a
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high
risk of
accidentaly
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accidentally
accidental
when the computer can not detect some obstacles,
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in
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high speed
of
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due
yo
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bad weather
condictions
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conditions
or night travelling. If the
car
is not able to avoid a simple accident, the
passegers
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passengers
will face a high
securuty
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security
risk. Even though with current technological advances, generally something goes wrong inside
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the computer
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. For
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example
one of the driveless
cartesting
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car testing
for uber crashed
a women
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at night two
year
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ago,
unfortunaties
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unfortunates
the girl died. If a human had been driven the
car
, the accident would not have
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.
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sum up, saving time and travelling relax is important, but safety is most, so in my opinion with the correct
tecnology
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technology
, I will be glad
travelling
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in a
driveless
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driverless
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car
around cities and places.
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