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design of buildings have positive or negative impact.GIVE YOUR OPINION

#design #buildings #impact
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 of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in that
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the design
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 of buildings
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 a positive or negative impact on
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 work or life . There is a widespread worry that
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 will only lead to a myriad of concerns in society.
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 and disadvantages of using a prudent approach and lead to a logical conclusion. On the
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 hand,
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 of the most significant benefits of the picture of hut positive shock on crowd task or growth is that
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Good performance and
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a relaxed
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 community mind. Needless to say, the aforementioned claim stands
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 in good stead, as far as augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
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, there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance.
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 of the most preponderant ones
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 that layout of construction have negative brunt on
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 task or
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the community in various ways.
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, the nation becomes lazy .
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 the research conducted by the Australian government, more than thirty per cent of participants
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of
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 the picture of architecture .
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, technology affects the health of the individual .
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, in my opinion, the government of Australia is taking a great initiative in educating its public on the shock of the scheme of the home has a positive or negative impact on social work or life . Citizens are being encouraged to adhere to the rules and regulations to promote competence, efficacy and a constructive environment in society. In view of the arguments outlined above,
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 can conclude that despite having some Benefits , the drawbacks
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and effects
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 of the design of buildings in
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society are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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