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Celebrities and their
salaries
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 nowadays are considered a ubiquitous debate all over the globe. Their high
salaries
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 gravitate vast amount of youngsters to change their careers to be one of them one day. Many of the public
people
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 do not see that would make any trouble if they get high
salaries
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 while others think that it is more than usual. I adopt the stance that many of those
entertainers
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 do not deserve what they get. In
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essay I will discuss both points of view and give examples for both views.
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 with, many of the
entertainers
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 are squandering the
money
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 that could be spent in a beneficial way like charity purposes because
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money
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 is not restricted to specific criteria of
people
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.
For instance
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, in 2017 Emma Watson who is a Hollywood actress was paid 142 million dollars for her
last
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 movie, which is considered to be wasting of
money
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.
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, that can be spent on rebuilding the society or at least contributing to that.
This
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 shows that many of young generation when they follow any celeb they can go to any extent and do anything to imitate them.
On the other hand
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, the rest of the
people
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 who take a proponent side and justify the high
salaries
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 of the
entertainers
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 is of a belief that they are role models and represent the country and its talents all over the world.
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, the quintessential role that they are doing in advising the youth and the awareness campaigns they make.
For example
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, in 2014 Angelina Jolie who is a Hollywood celebrity had made a campaign for starved
people
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 in Somalia and donated for them. Surprisingly, her campaign gained a lot of
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 and welcome all over the globe.
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, their roles and their impact on
people
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 cannot be replaced with anything else. In conclusion, it can be reiterated that those
entertainers
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 may exert a beneficial role in our society but
also
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 it cannot be compared to the
money
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 that they get.
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, many of them could donate to different charity organization’s which could be advantageous but in my humble ,opinion I think that it is a few amounts of
money
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 that originally belong to the public.
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