It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extant do you agree of disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Training of a child should begin during childhood and it should involve parents at home, as well as the teachers in school. It is often argued that it is necessary to properly guide children on how to do things properly as well as
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should be provided when they do not follow proper instructions.
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of all, I believe that providing a little hardship but not in a physical form will help a pupil to do the right thing.
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to be several warnings.
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them remember,
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age group, the likelihood of being forgetful is quite high.
For instance
, a naughty corner can be made available at home or school for those who misbehave and
this
should only be used when a child has been cautioned on many occasions.
In addition
, they might feel bad or even embarrassed in front of their classmates or siblings. On
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account, it is very unlikely for the
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to be repeated.
On the other hand
, certain repercussions might arise
as a result
of not instituting a strategy to make the children act right.
However
, Injuries can be sustained in some cases and
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could either be a minor or major trauma depending on the circumstance.
For example
, a child that climbs his desk repeatedly without being punished might eventually fall and sustain injuries.
In other words
,
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could have been avoided in the
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place. To sum up, I strongly believe that providing a mild form of punishment in form of a reminder
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will help in teaching the young ones
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how to be well behaved.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Moral development
  • Positive reinforcement
  • Negative reinforcement
  • Behavioral psychology
  • Disciplinary methods
  • Corporal punishment
  • Psychological effects
  • Authoritative parenting
  • Permissive parenting
  • Behavioural correction
  • Ethical considerations
  • Legal frameworks
  • Cognitive development
  • Social norms
  • Character building
  • Restorative practices
  • Authoritarian approach
  • Constructive criticism
  • Pro-social behavior
  • Conditioning
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