Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a persons culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Fashion style is a way where
people
can express themselves, their
culture
or even their
character
. I mostly agree with
this
statement and I will explain why
clothes
could represent our identity in
society
.
First
of all, the
first
impression we caused
in
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others is important. Job interviews are
good
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example
because it takes seconds
to
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someone
recognizes
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if one is trustworthy, and their
clothes
definitely could be the difference to take the job or not.
Moreover
, it is
also
an expression of how we want
the
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society
sees us. Nowadays,
for instance
, many
people
are changing their sexual identity and their
clothes
could help
the
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society
to identify the gender, and how they want to be called.
Therefore
,
clothes
help us to identify and to communicate better with others about who we are.
Secondly
, when we wear specific patterns and colours, it is
also
an expression of
culture
.
For
example
, everyone might identify at
distance
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what is a typical African tunic because it is extremely expressive and rememberable with
their
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its
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warm colours and geometric patterns.
Furthermore
, teenagers usually want to look the same as their friends, so if one teen
decides
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wear gothic style, other teens will wear the same dark, spike
clothes
.
Therefore
,
people
use their
clothes
for
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express their
culture
, community or even the group they belong to.
However
, I do not believe that wearing fancy
clothes
meaning reflects
people
'
character
. There are many thieves and evil
people
wearing luxurious
clothes
to
stole
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and damage
people
.
For
example
, thieves used to wear suits and play a good
character
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to find victims and
stole
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steal
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them. Another good
example
is that there are some
people
who buy expensive
fashion
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clothes
just to show
the
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society
how much rich they are, even though they are always living in
debts
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.
Therefore
, good
character
or richness cannot be judged just by fashion. To conclude, it is true that
people
can have some idea about the one identity,
culture
or gender by their
clothes
but not about their
character
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional garments
  • Cultural background
  • Personal identity
  • Character traits
  • Social status
  • Profession
  • Subcultures
  • Conformity
  • External factors
  • Globalization
  • Fashion trends
  • Cultural identity
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