Car drivers and cyclists share the same roads, and this can cause problems for both of them. Why is this the case? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

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Problems may be caused by vehicle
drivers
and
cyclists
who try to share
roads
. These
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annoying
issues can differ from each other depending on who
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the problem causing Solutions which could solve these problems, can be done by
government
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and citizens who might solve them by themselves. Traffic laws which are intended for people on bikes
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are not followed by riders of cycles and
this
behavior
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can be changed with information about rules. By
this
I mean,
cyclists
ride in
unapproriate
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inappropriate
parts of
roads
and their actions have disturbed
drivers
of cars. To be more specific if
person
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in a
car
see
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cyclist
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a cyclist
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who
try
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to circumvent him in
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an unsuitable
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place,
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the driver
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will try to change his position or move to another line.
As a result
, he might have crashed into another
car
and he
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not like going
to
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somewhere by
car
. The
first
practical solution at the moment is to get
cyclists
informed about the most vital laws for
cycler
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cyclers
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on the
road
.
For instance
, the
governments
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workers would
must
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give
buclets
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buckets
bullets
about common rules on the
road
, to
cyclists
, and
then
workers would
must
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explain
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bicyclists why they are giving the booklets and how these papers should be used. Automobile
drivers
do not willing to share any
road
with simple
cyclists
and new rule ,which is related to the bike riders, creating may help to stop violence on the
road
.
In other words
, bike riders have been suffering from the disparaging attitude of
car
drivers
also
cyclists
are forced by
drivers
to ride on insecure parts of the
roads
.
As a result
, wheelmans' might get injured when they would run into
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sign
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or advertising boards and pedestrians could suffer from their actions
also
. At the same time, if the government and police invent new regulation
law
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about
a
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position of biсyclists in the
road
, bicyclists will be able to ride without anxiety and neglect from
drivers
. All in all, after
cyclists
would become
the
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official member of the
road
, they would not ride and get injured
in
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a dangerous routes
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. To sum up, problems are caused by
cyclists
who are unaware
about
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laws and
car
drivers
who do not want to share
roads
with unofficial vehicles. These issues may be resolved by the government and citizens with the
using
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of information booklets and adding the new rule about bikes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • share the same roads
  • cause problems
  • lack of understanding
  • limited infrastructure
  • reckless behavior
  • increased awareness
  • education
  • enforcing traffic laws
  • regulations
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