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Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

#people #children #subjects #mathematics #philosophy
In
this
 day and age, some advocate the view that complicated subjects of
nature
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 science should be selected as students' choice. To the best of my knowledge, I strongly disagree with
this
 statement and will outline the reasons below. On the one hand, it is complementary for school children to learn a program with a diversity of
topic
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, which later
deepen
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 their fundamental knowledge. On top of
this
, logical thinking and other calculation skills
is
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 set to play a pivotal role to develop
wisedom
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wisdom
 for the young generation in
early
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 years to develop cognitive ability.
Therefore
, in order to organize comprehensive education, the
present
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 of
tough
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 and vague
section
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sections
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 of math and
phylosophy
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philosophy
 should remain mandatory to trigger the inborn curiosity of children.
On the contrary
, if school managers decided to
obmit
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omit
submit
 these
subject
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subjects
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 out of
priority
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 list, their pupils would gradually
be discourage
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in
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stuydying
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studying
 inasmuch as the other tasks are within reach.
On the other hand
, basic knowledge in
nature
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 science is of paramount
important
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 for individuals to apply
into
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 daily activity. The main justification is that a person
need
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 to complete essential sections to gain qualification and dignity for higher education, which can enhance their advantages in
aldulthood
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adulthood
. Statistically, those who
has
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broaden
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 their horizon
the a
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 myriad of fields
prone
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 to achieve a
pretige
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prestige
 status in all likelihood. Another rationale is that recollection from the mentioned
subjected
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 can be imperative in
emmergency
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emergency
occurence
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occurrence
 namely sickness, accident or natural disaster. In conclusion, so important are these difficult
subject
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 that they should always be at preference in any teaching program to motivate the holistic growth of children.
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