Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number, and so on) for purposes such as signing up for social networks or online banking. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is undeniable fact that online networks
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become very common for everyone, a myriad of individual upload their own details on social media as well as the vocational website for their self-reference. Change the verb form
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To commence with, several rationales affecting this
and leading one is easy for job application, in other words
, most of the big corporate industries hire the employment by operating online networking apps such
as, 'nokri.com' and ' linked.in', so they can easily find out candidate's personal biodata and direct contact them. For specimen, last
years
around 68% of people got their job by online networks, they did not have to hustle to find a walk-in interview, Fix the agreement mistake
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, it can be said that for
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the online website is a positive development.
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However
, it seldom to give a thought to ponder over the other side of the story that online fraud can occur, in other words
, almost all banking transactions link to the mobile number, so offenders may easily robbery to credit amount in one's account by hacking their mobile number and reach their bank transaction. For instance
, according to the newspaper in Mumbai city, an individual was looted by 4000000/- rs. In his unsecure online network media. In hance putting personal information may turn negative development sometimes.
In conclusion, the seemingly inexorable debate about the
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Nevertheless
, showing the deep reverence for all aspects and observing the finer nuances for all the matters mentioned, I espouse to
the notion of supporting online fraud for negative development, which people should consider properly.Change preposition
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