Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this is a bad example to adolescents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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day and age, many traditional values have dramatically changed. There are lots of w

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individuals who are famous for their high living standards rather than their personal success. In my opinion, I strongly criticise

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way of life owing to the fact that it can generate negative influence on the young generation. On the one hand,

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celebrity's wealthy acquisition provokes a squandered lifestyle. Having the easy money inherited from parents, they have the tendency to waste it for leisure activities rather than investing it to acquire a consolidated financial state. Britney Spears who was renowned as the Pop Princess is a prime example of

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. Because of her impulsive buying, she now has to live in poverty and burdens an enormous debt. In the end, the far-reaching consequence is that the adolescents might imitate

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lifestyle, ruining the future of a whole nation. On the other side of the argument, only the success of celebrities is the thing

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worth learning. A memoir of one talented singer who overcame his adversity in order to chase ambition is always an inspirational story for the young generation.

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, despite dropping out of university, Bill G

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fought his way through social prejudice and became a billionaire at a very young age. These personal achievements serve as the m

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dolescents to get out of t

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comfort zone and try to be the best a

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their field. In all, the celebrity is the one w

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young people look up to and they can either provoke a squandered lifestyle or inspire them to be the better version of themselves.

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, it is the adolescents who must have their own judgment to choose who to learn or to criticise.