You live in a room in college which you share with another student. There are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: • describe the situation • explain the problems and why is it difficult to work • say how you would like the situation resolved.

Dear Warden, I am writing
this
letter to
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my
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. His behaviour is
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and polar opposite to
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. I have been living in
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number 32, building A from
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three months with
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. He use to party daily with his class friends in our
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to midnight and they play music too.
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was
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person and humble. But, he is my senior and do not want to follow the basic ethics to share a
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place. Kindly
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to minimise
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Otherwise
, I request you to shift me
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, preferably with one of my
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because it will make
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easy to study together with
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him.
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, you will understand the situation. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Sangha
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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