At the present time, the population of some countries of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Older people form a lower percentage of

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in some regions of the world. In recent times, it is noticeable in some nations that adolescents form

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the majority

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of the populace compared to the elderly.

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essay will discuss how the positive impact of the situation outweighs the disadvantages. To start with, there is a glaring increase in the number of young adults in some countries.

However

,

this

rise can have its benefits as well as

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effect. The major advantage is that

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these

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age group forms a greater proportion of the

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workforce

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and will

also

be very efficient compared to old people.

For instance

, in the agricultural sector, they will provide highly proficient services in terms of supervising and organization of farms.

In addition

, the generation of revenue will

also

reach its peak due to their involvement in activities and

this

can be used as a means to

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care for older people who are at risk of having chronic diseases.

On the other hand

, certain drawbacks can

also

arise from

this

situation. A lot of times, there can be

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level of unemployment and they can

also

cause instability in a particular region.

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, in Nigeria where I come from, the politicians exploit these age

group

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most of the time and use them as political thugs thereby making them

to

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cause disarray during

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electorial

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process. The main reason for

this

is that

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they do not have any means of

generation

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funds to take care of themselves and

hence

, they are provided with little stipends by the high class. In conclusion, some communities have a large portion of teenagers and despite

this

, they can lead the cities into crises.

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they constitute an important aspect of societies, they have to be adequately taken care of.

Finally

, it is necessary to pay very close attention to their needs especially in terms of education.