In developing countries, children in rural communities have less access to education. Some people believe that the problem can be solved by providing more schools and teachers, while others think that the problem can be solved by providing computers and Internet access. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable the fact that compared with central children, those who are studying in rural areas find it hard to access the education system properly. To discuss

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issue

people

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's opinions are divided in two directions. While some

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believe that increasing the number of

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and

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in

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is the best way to handle these problems, others argue that funding in science and technology

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as computers or the

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seems more useful. In

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essay, I will discuss both views before giving my opinion. On the one hand, a large number of

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find it effective to learn in

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with direct

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.

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are not only a fulfilling environment for studying but

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a perfect area for

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to learn how to communicate with other

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. Because of that reason,

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are

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known as a minimized

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. Some experts

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showed that those

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who grow up in suitable

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tend to have wealthier mental health than

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,

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education in

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and

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contributes a vital part

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children’s personalities, so

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existence

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is an indispensable part of each life.

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, humans live in the world of science and technology

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forcing us to update day

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in order to catch up with the times and other

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. To achieve

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target, computers and the

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are necessary.

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need

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to be proactive in their academic progress which allows them to search and look for any information in any field they want, without the limit in the textbooks or the curriculums.

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, thanks to the development of the

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,

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can learn many work skills

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or time contributed, which leads to a bright future for any

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students

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, by self-learning throughout study life,

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when working in a company may be more active in their work than other

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with the aim of getting more chances to succeed. In conclusion, both views are giving much more required benefits for young

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. I personally hold the belief that both the increase of

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,

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and the developments of computers and the

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are

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essential for each student.