Many different countries have most shops and products as the same. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Without any doubt, it has become evident that society is divided into two groups as per the distinct
mindset
of different people. Fix the agreement mistake
mindsets
Therefore
, this
has become a debatable issue whether the effects of globalization such
as the same products and shops are detrimental or undeniably beneficial. This
essay will shed light on these stated perceptions and discuss my point of view in conclusion.
On the one hand, owing to the availability of different stock
in terms of varieties as compared to the past, the reach of the common public has increased. Fix the agreement mistake
stocks
This
is to say when ordering from abroad, only wealthy families were able to buy imported things because they were sufficiently capable of paying the extra charges incurred in terms of shipping and tax. Apart from
this
, import and export business has dwelled between countries, thus
, making the economy of involved nations prosper in a positive direction. For example
, a report published by the “Economic and Finance Department” cited that the export-import business helped the economy of India to boost by 7% after the great recession period occurred in 2007. Moreover
, it also
stated that this
booming economy created 45% more job opportunities which further
helped it to rise.
On the other hand
, globalization caused local vendors serious problems. To simply
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simplify
this
, the
society took less interest in local brands Correct article usage
apply
in contrast
to the merchandise from foreign companies, thus
, due to
the continuously diminishing popularity of native items, lots of shops got closed and people went jobless. To cite an example, a survey conducted by the “Employment and Grievance Department” in 2018 in India reported that approximately 4 out of 10 people’s
had lost their work Change noun form
people
due to
more inclination towards western
produce.
In conclusion, Capitalize word
Western
according to
my perspective, it has widened the reach of the community as well as
helped the economic segment of a country to boom. However
, it is an arduous task to ignore the adverse effects that it has on people
lives,Change noun form
people's
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