In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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developing
such
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. Some countries where some individuals believe that lots of money Fix the agreement mistake
systems
is
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establishment
the standard infrastructure as Replace the word
establishing
railway
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the railway
that is
express ways
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expressways
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over different towns. While others argue the money is paramount for Correct your spelling
income
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the encouragement
this
statement that these money
should be brought in amelioration domestic Change the determiner
this money
vehicles
and also
will discuss both these points of views
.
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view
favor
of travel between centre stimulates economics. These can be attractive tourists come across in their areas because its structures are suitable and comfortable which do not waste time in moving to other places. Change the spelling
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In other words
, Thailand has already built new railway routes to countryside
and express trains is utilized which spend times only 5 hours Correct article usage
the countryside
instead
of 12 hours. From Thailand’s statistic
in 2010, the number of tourists increases gradually due to developed Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
structure
and cutting-edge technology. Fix the agreement mistake
structures
Therefore
, domestic income rises dramatically.
On the other hand
, public vehicles
are necessary for travelling in rural and urban areas. There have been the
different types of transportation Correct article usage
apply
such
as motorbike, sky train and bus
. Fix the agreement mistake
buses
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fall
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bus
was not old-fashioned and not Add an article
the bus
had
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have
security
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a security
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of Add an article
the safety
human
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humans
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for
improvement
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improving
vehicles
in favor
of their life.
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favour
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what
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