Many believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a real difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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successful nations without a person we cannot achieve a rich environment. They think hardly to reach a high level of improvement when they share their thoughts and suggestions to the administrator , so they exchange both ideas to get a better option . To illustrate that one place

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

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