Many believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a real difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some that people contribute less than organizations to the improvement that

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help

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to develop in many different aspects.

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the key

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successful nations without a person we cannot achieve a rich environment. They think hardly to reach a high level of improvement when they share their thoughts and suggestions to the administrator , so they exchange both ideas to get a better option . To illustrate that one place

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to be

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truly the government does not know what happen in the building unless the worker

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them the full story to help them act with the situation as soon as possible.

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companies does not make sense because what is the most important is individuals ideas and

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.

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point, sharing knowledge from here and there make them have equal effort to support the company.If we force them

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in the revolution they feel that they are valuable items in the

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best thing for their countries.

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a big effort to the

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environment

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human beings can do more than

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company in terms of planes and even finance if they want to alter

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small things.