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More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

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Today, the number of companies or
people
 who prefer being in touch with each other via the internet
instead
 of physical conversation for personal or working purposes is increasing. saving
time
 and not
be
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 limited to a place are the main benefits of virtual communication.
Also
, spending a lot of money as well as getting cancer are the main drawbacks of it. On the one hand, one of the main advantages of using the internet for holding a meeting is saving
time
 because today, for many businessmen or regular
people
time
 is a valuable factor in their life and every
second
 is count. So, with the virtual meeting, everyone would not be restricted to a physical place and they would attend a meeting on
time
.
On the other hand
, one of the main disadvantages of
this
 phenomenon is increasing the chance of diagnosing different types of cancers. because communication via the internet can expose us to a lot of amount of electromagnetic radiation.
As a result
, these types of radiation are harmful and dangerous for our health and they could be the main reasons for cancers.
For instance
, according to New York Times, with accelerating cutting-edge technology, the breast cancer rate has been increasing about 43% only in the United State of America since 2019.
Also
, the
second
 con is that for holding
this
 meeting
people
, especially businesses, should have to spend a lot of money on their devices. because most of them, at least, should have the latest model of the personal computer. So,
this
 can be so costly for them especially for
people
 with a low budget who could not afford it. In conclusion, today many businesses or regular
people
 prefer virtual meetings
instead
 of physical meetings, and the main reasons for
this
 phenomenon are wasting less
time
 and are not limited to a place.
However
, the new technology would be costly for everyone and chronic diseases
such
 as cancer could threaten
people
.
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