Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days with the spread of technology and developments, a phenomenon called

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has formed, which societies are becoming facing. The question is, is

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phenomenon will lead to a complete loss of cultural identity? In

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essay, I am going to discuss

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of

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mass communication and transport leading to

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and the loss of

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and draw my own conclusion. In terms of disadvantages,

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globalization

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made

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to

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exit and

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from

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their own

religions

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. The main reason to support

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claim is that a lot of Muslims nowadays do not practice their

religions

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accurately and correctly as in the past. And their faith

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impacts

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intuitively by the other

religions

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around the world. To illustrate, some Arab Muslims celebrated Christmas with their family every year in the various cities in their country and they decorate their houses

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a Christmas tree.

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, they

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the western

culture

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that forbidden in their

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and tradition.

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, many

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from the different cities in the world

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their

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.

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,

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category of

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strongly believe is

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whole

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of developments which was

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occurred

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and made the world as a small village and

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the ability easily to communicate with

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by one click on smart devices, will not change

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of their belief and

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.

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, the Jews do not allow by any changes or a strange tradition to change ways of

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their god.

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, too many

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taking advantage of

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in

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things helpful and valuable or maybe in

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entertainment.

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, diversity is

inevitable

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part of our formation

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psychological. In conclusion,

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globalization

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has

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positive, it has a significant

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effect on our tradition.

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, I believe that

globalization

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is a way to go away

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values and habits.