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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that these days with the spread of technology and developments, a phenomenon called
globalization
 has formed, which societies are becoming facing. The question is, is
this
 phenomenon will lead to a complete loss of cultural identity? In
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mass communication and transport leading to
globalization
 and the loss of
culture
 and draw my own conclusion. In terms of disadvantages,
the
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globalization
 made
people
to
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exit and
dropout
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from
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 their own
religions
. The main reason to support
this
 claim is that a lot of Muslims nowadays do not practice their
religions
 accurately and correctly as in the past. And their faith
now
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 intuitively by the other
religions
 around the world. To illustrate, some Arab Muslims celebrated Christmas with their family every year in the various cities in their country and they decorate their houses
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 a Christmas tree.
In other words
, they
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 the western
culture
 that forbidden in their
religions
 and tradition.
However
, many
people
 from the different cities in the world
are respect
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 their
culture
.
Firstly
,
this
 category of
people
 strongly believe is
although
whole
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 of developments which was
accurr
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occurred
accurate
occur
 and made the world as a small village and
also
 the ability easily to communicate with
people
 by one click on smart devices, will not change
thing
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 of their belief and
culture
.
In other words
, the Jews do not allow by any changes or a strange tradition to change ways of
worshiping
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 their god.
Secondly
, too many
people
 taking advantage of
globalization
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things helpful and valuable or maybe in
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entertainment.
Also
, diversity is
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 part of our formation
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psychological. In conclusion,
although
globalization
 has
its
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 positive, it has a significant
harm
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harmful
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 effect on our tradition.
Therefore
, I believe that
globalization
 is a way to go away
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 values and habits.
Submitted by besho0h on

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