Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that these days with the spread of technology and developments, a phenomenon called
globalization
has formed, which societies are becoming facing. The question is, is this
phenomenon will lead to a complete loss of cultural identity? In this
essay, I am going to discuss effects
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the effects
a
mass communication and transport leading to Remove the article
apply
globalization
and the loss of culture
and draw my own conclusion.
In terms of disadvantages, the
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globalization
made people
to
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apply
dropout
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drop out
from
their own Change preposition
of
religions
. The main reason to support this
claim is that a lot of Muslims nowadays do not practice their religions
accurately and correctly as in the past. And their faith now
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is now
impacts
intuitively by the other Wrong verb form
impacted
religions
around the world. To illustrate, some Arab Muslims celebrated Christmas with their family every year in the various cities in their country and they decorate their houses by
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with
In other words
, they are imitated
the western Change the verb form
have imitated
culture
that forbidden in their religions
and tradition.
However
, many people
from the different cities in the world are respect
their Change the verb form
respect
culture
. Firstly
, this
category of people
strongly believe is although
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of developments which was Add an article
the whole
accurr
and made the world as a small village and Correct your spelling
occurred
accurate
occur
also
the ability easily to communicate with people
by one click on smart devices, will not change thing
of their belief and Add an article
a thing
culture
. In other words
, the Jews do not allow by any changes or a strange tradition to change ways of worshiping
their god. Change the spelling
worshipping
Secondly
, too many people
taking advantage of globalization
in the
things helpful and valuable or maybe in Correct article usage
apply
the
entertainment. Correct article usage
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Also
, diversity is inevitable
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an inevitable
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of the
the
psychological.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
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although
globalization
has its
positive, it has a significant Replace the word
it's
it is
harm
effect on our tradition. Replace the word
harmful
Therefore
, I believe that globalization
is a way to go away of
values and habits.Change preposition
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