Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days with the spread of technology and developments, a phenomenon called
globalization
has formed, which societies are becoming facing. The question is, is
this
phenomenon will lead to a complete loss of cultural identity? In
this
essay, I am going to discuss
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mass communication and transport leading to
globalization
and the loss of
culture
and draw my own conclusion. In terms of disadvantages,
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globalization
made
people
to
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exit and
dropout
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from
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their own
religions
. The main reason to support
this
claim is that a lot of Muslims nowadays do not practice their
religions
accurately and correctly as in the past. And their faith
now
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intuitively by the other
religions
around the world. To illustrate, some Arab Muslims celebrated Christmas with their family every year in the various cities in their country and they decorate their houses
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a Christmas tree.
In other words
, they
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the western
culture
that forbidden in their
religions
and tradition.
However
, many
people
from the different cities in the world
are respect
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their
culture
.
Firstly
,
this
category of
people
strongly believe is
although
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the whole
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of developments which was
accurr
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occurred
accurate
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and made the world as a small village and
also
the ability easily to communicate with
people
by one click on smart devices, will not change
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of their belief and
culture
.
In other words
, the Jews do not allow by any changes or a strange tradition to change ways of
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their god.
Secondly
, too many
people
taking advantage of
globalization
in
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things helpful and valuable or maybe in
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entertainment.
Also
, diversity is
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part of our formation
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psychological. In conclusion,
although
globalization
has
its
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positive, it has a significant
harm
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effect on our tradition.
Therefore
, I believe that
globalization
is a way to go away
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values and habits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pessimistic outlook
  • exposed to negative news
  • stress and anxiety
  • success stories
  • balanced reporting
  • well-informed public
  • rational decisions
  • sense of helplessness
  • apathy
  • skew public perception
  • mistrust in institutions
  • enhance well-being
  • mental health
  • manipulate public opinion
  • serve specific agendas
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