Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been said that
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the actual protection for the globe can be done only by the authority, as atmospheric impurity has been reached at
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rate and cannot be
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by the inhabitants.I, totally disagree, with
this
notion that only the regime can combat with
this
problem.In upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss my viewpoints with relevant examples.
To begin
with, it is true that
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environmental pollution has been increased at
peak
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, which is now hard to
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by people. To make the
environment
eco-friendly relevant steps can be taken only by the ministry.
First
of all, the
governmant
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government
has been already done a lot to save our planet. To cite an example, the Air Act 1974, the Water Act 1981, the
Environment
Protection Act 1986
such
laws were
impelemented
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implemented
by the regime. But the reason is, we the dwellers of
this
planet had not
took
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these laws seriously to save our ecosystem.
Hence
,
still
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we have time to save it, by taking the solutions
seriuosly
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seriously
.
Moreover
, we, the inhabitants take a lot of benefits from
this
planet "the earth", but in
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we are playing with beauty and nature by cutting forests, by digging mines at different places, by using transports, which emits
harmfull
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harmful
gasses. So, if we are doing these things, it is
also
our duty to make it clean and safe.
For instance
, we visit any beach or hill station, there are many dustbins for
rubbish
, but many inhabitants throw the
rubbish
on road
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or on ground and others,
however
after watching that, start throwing
rubbish
near there,
instead
of in the bins. It indicates we follow others, and if any person throw that
rubbish
in
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by taking it from ground or floor, other will feel shame and will avoid
to do
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the same thing again.
As a result
, if the government is doing something to save
environment
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the environment
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, ahead, it is our responsibility to follow the rules
imlemented
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implemented
by the regime. In conclusion, it has been noticed that
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the government already doing a lot for our
environment
, but it's
also
our duty to make it safe and clean for our upcoming generation.we cannot leave everything on the authority, to save our globe from pollution we all should take steps together.
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