Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been said that by people. To make the
,
the actual protection for the globe can be done only by the authority, as atmospheric impurity has been reached at Remove the comma
apply
alarming
rate and cannot be Add an article
an alarming
handle
by the inhabitants.I, totally disagree, with Wrong verb form
handled
this
notion that only the regime can combat with this
problem.In upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss my viewpoints with relevant examples.
To begin
with, it is true that the
environmental pollution has been increased at Correct article usage
apply
peak
, which is now hard to Correct pronoun usage
its peak
dealt
Change the verb
deal
Change preposition
with
environment
eco-friendly relevant steps can be taken only by the ministry. First
of all, the governmant
has been already done a lot to save our planet. To cite an example, the Air Act 1974, the Water Act 1981, the Correct your spelling
government
Environment
Protection Act 1986 such
laws were impelemented
by the regime. But the reason is, we the dwellers of Correct your spelling
implemented
this
planet had not took
these laws seriously to save our ecosystem. Change the verb form
taken
Hence
, still
we have time to save it, by taking the solutions Add a comma
,still
seriuosly
.
Correct your spelling
seriously
Moreover
, we, the inhabitants take a lot of benefits from this
planet "the earth", but in opposite
we are playing with beauty and nature by cutting forests, by digging mines at different places, by using transports, which emits Add a comma
,opposite
harmfull
gasses. So, if we are doing these things, it is Correct your spelling
harmful
also
our duty to make it clean and safe. For instance
, we visit any beach or hill station, there are many dustbins for rubbish
, but many inhabitants throw the rubbish
on road
or on ground and others, Add a hyphen
on-road
however
after watching that, start throwing rubbish
near there, instead
of in the bins. It indicates we follow others, and if any person throw that rubbish
in bin
by taking it from ground or floor, other will feel shame and will avoid Add an article
the bin
a bin
to do
the same thing again.Change the verb form
doing
As a result
, if the government is doing something to save environment
, ahead, it is our responsibility to follow the rules Add an article
the environment
imlemented
by the regime.
In conclusion, it has been noticed thatCorrect your spelling
implemented
,
the government already doing a lot for our Remove the comma
apply
environment
, but it's also
our duty to make it safe and clean for our upcoming generation.we cannot leave everything on the authority, to save our globe from pollution we all should take steps together.Submitted by Mandeep on
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