Some people say now there is less communication between family members than past. agree or disagree ?

Communication plays a vital role in socialization, in
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the kinship
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faded gradually;
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has become a global village .Yet, in many ,
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it has grown apart. Apparently, the family ties a becoming weaker gradually ,there are several reasons behind
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lifestyle , value and goal. Because they don't have enough time to communicate with other kinship. Due to the rat race in their life toward their goals and their monotonous lifestyle.
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number of the highest death rates due to suicide in their Nation. Moving toward, the
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worthy point is a generation gap , youngster tends more on their personality and social media that the elder ones
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like their behaviour.
Thus
, the kinship
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with each other And the younger generation is
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not known about their relatives. Because they don't have enough time for their relatives. By way of conclusion,
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everyone is busy in their hectic schedule , the generation gap and Technology is
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indulging in a lack of communication yet, they should give time to their family members for better bonding with each other.
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