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In many countries, people do not recycle waste material, such as paper, glass and cans. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

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In various nations, individual’s
don’t
 recycle a particular product which have been used once ,
such
 as paper , glass and cans.
However
, behind
this
 phenomenon there are several reasons.
To begin
 with, recycling plays an important role in contemporary world which helps alot to keep environment safe. Nowadays
people
don’t
 recycle , they prefer to buy new products rather than using the same again.
This
 situation has numerous reasons which leads
people
 not to recycle things.
First
 of all, human’s are boastful , they feel insult in using the same item again. In order to make a good reputation in a society they are more into wasting material
instead
 to recycling and reusing it. To cite an example:- A rich person under a social pressure acts like he
don’t
 use the old material more than once even if it’s in good condition and tend to buy new product’s for the same purpose.
However
,
this
 problem can be solved by increasing awareness among
people
 , which will affect their way of using material and it will lead majority of
people
 to recycle waste material. The another prominent reason is, individual’s believe recycled material doesn’t remain pure as it was, when produced.
This
 has became thinking of majority of
people
 which is the another reason for not recycling. To vindicate :- a survey was conducted in which ,
people
 of ludhiana were asked some questions related to recycling and more than half of the population gave statement of impurity of recycled products. Due to
this
 belief
people
don’t
 prefer to use recycled item. In conclusion,
although
 recycling the detritus waste has a diverse effect. Both government bodies and human’s should represent views to tackle the problem of recycling
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