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Nowadays, people move from one country to another for work. Some people think children of these families suffer because of this, while others think it is helpful for them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In our current situation, a lot of citizens from different nations go abroad for job opportunities which make some believe that the
children
 will bear the consequences of that, while there are
also
 other people who were convinced that it is for the benefit of the
children
. It is my belief that the main reason
of
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parents
 for working abroad is to give a better life for their kids.
This
 essay will discuss its negative effects on their kids as well as its benefits. On one hand, there are negative effects to consider whenever someone in the family goes abroad especially the
parents
.
Children
 that are left may feel abandoned and neglected which may impose a bad impact on their mental health. Those emotions may lead to behavioural problems and even long-term effects that may appear later in their lives.
For instance
, studies had found out that parent-abroad adolescents felt emotionally lonelier which later suffer emotional stress and health issues.
On the other hand
, guardians and caregivers of
children
 choose to seek employment abroad for a higher salary.
Moreover
,
a
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bigger pay
rates
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 in other countries will give
parents
 a chance to give their child better life and will
also
 help them finance their child’s education.
This
 is so much applicable to
parents
 whose child is going to tertiary education. I could consider myself one of those because my mother
also
 went abroad in order to sustain my needs in college. In conclusion, while there are emotional issues left to the family of those migrating abroad for employment. It is
also
 important to take into consideration that the desire for fulfilling family’s needs is their primary reason for leaving the country.
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