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IELTS essay, topic: The proportion of older people is increasing, what problems will this cause and what solutions can be suggested? In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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Taiwan has already entered an ageing society since 1993. The evolution of social patterns not only has changed in the past decade but
also
 has influenced local economics.
Although
 there undoubtedly will be some negative consequences to
this
 trend, governments and society can take a step to lighten potential
problems
. As
people
 can live longer by medical advances, the main issue is that more
people
 of retirement age are eligible to receive a pension, but the working adults will be smaller in the future, and the government receives less money in taxes, these changes make younger
people
 need to face more life pressure and take care of an elder.
Therefore
, some younger
people
 don't want to get married or become Dinky, which
also
 causes declining birthrate
problems
. There are several actions that governments can take to solve the
problems
.
Firstly
, a complete Long-term care system would improve the basic life quality of older
people
,
this
 system includes home service, medical and domestic chore services.
Second
, governments could encourage immigration in order to increase the working population.
For example
, New Zealand has unveiled plans to ease
the
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immigration restrictions.
In addition
, the retirement age could be extended from 65 to 70, because
people
 can live longer and have enough health to keep working. Ago society is an unavoidable problem,
although
 some policies have been promoted to release the
problems
, citizens
also
 have responsibilities to keep up the good work.
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