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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is argued by some that the most suitable approach to achieve an appropriate vocation is completing education. Another common opinion is that gaining maturity and expanding working abilities are far more crucial.
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 has a significant role in getting a good job, I strongly believe that
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 scholarship is more essential. I will address several reasons for both groups in
this
 essay. On the one hand, it is claimed by a number of employers that hiring occupation seekers with practical wisdom is far more beneficial to them due to reducing the amount of cost on training industrial skills to fresh graduates.
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, it is to their benefit to hire people who have already had
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 as opposed to accepting to invest in training new labour who just have an academic degree.
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, it is supposed that safety-oriented courses have been attended by a person with one or two years of hands-on industrial background.
Therefore
, hiring
this
 person is financially far more acceptable.
On the other hand
, in most cases, companies place a premium on well-educated occupation seekers due to a vast range of reasons.
Firstly
, fulfilment in securing academic qualifications is obvious proof that you are able to rise through the ranks.
Secondly
,
although
 getting a job without a formal degree is possible, you can find it struggle to advance professionally.
For instance
, state-of-the-art technologies are used by some companies,
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 you have to know about the latest scientific knowledge to become a versatile workforce.
Finally
, despite those mentioned reasons, having tertiary education will enable you to earn a higher salary right from your outset. To sum up,
although
 it is said by some that well-educated people have a better chance to find a good vocation, I would definitely argue that high education is far more pivotal.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • specialized training
  • networking
  • baseline requirement
  • financial burden
  • hands-on experience
  • practical skills
  • soft skills
  • dynamic job market
  • entrepreneur
  • formal education
  • portfolio
  • hybrid approach
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