many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar,which causes many health problems. sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Sugar
is the one important element in all kinds of food and drink which give sweet tastes, whereas the impact of consuming a high level of Use synonyms
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becomes the cause of serious health problems. Use synonyms
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, some people think the solution is that goods with high Linking Words
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should be made at a higher price. In my opinion, Use synonyms
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would bring economic issues. In Linking Words
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essay, I will elucidate the issue which would happen and the solution of Linking Words
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problem, and the following examples will be provided to support my point of view.
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To begin
with, the effect of making higher prices for food or drink which have a huge amount of Linking Words
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is that living costs will increase because most people consume Use synonyms
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kind of product due to their good tasting and the feeling of energy. So, if sugary items are made at a higher price, it is likely to fix eating behaviours. Linking Words
For example
, according to the latest survey conducted by Bangkok University, it has been released that 80% of people who have ordered the coffee and cakes from the luxury cafe's brand tend to like their tastes , even if they have to pay more. Linking Words
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would clearly see that the price is not the best way to solve the Linking Words
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consumption behaviour's humans.
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firstly
, education is needed in order to promote awareness and attitude of disease which can be caused by consuming a high level of Linking Words
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as diabetic type 2, cardiovascular disease, neurological disease or even fatty liver which lead to cirrhosis and liver cancer eventually. Linking Words
Secondly
, manufacturers should provide a clear percentage of ingredient labels on the products, because some details enable public confusion. Linking Words
For instance
, they show 23% of Linking Words
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in lower details, while the one on the top which is a smaller letter informs that they are contained in half of all. Use synonyms
Therefore
, if some do not properly read, it might cause misunderstanding. Acknowledgement should be a substantial way to change consumer behaviour.
In conclusion, sweet things would bring many critical health problems;Linking Words
however
, eating well is the best way to keep healthy and avoid the cause of serious diseases.Linking Words
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