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In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in the in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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These days, most of the businesses try to show their goods are the
last
 version of them in the advertising. It would be because of the competition between organizations which is so common
lastly
.
Although
 it might have some benefits, my impression is that's a kind of negative advertisement.
This
 is so contemplative to demonstrate products like the new mentality of
people
 Which is ''best things, newest things" right now in their advertisement.
This
 is a new trend between public to having the newest stuff is so classy.
For example
,
people
 in my country would change their house's furniture
such
 as sofa and carpet every other year. So businesses use
this
 statement in their advertisement to sell as much as possible. The main reason why I believe
this
 cannot be a positive development is that in
this
 way buyers inflict harm because of the price increase. Salesmen will upgrade stuff's price whenever
people
 go to meet that thing like the iPhone which is one of the most expensive cell phone brands in recent years. Another drawback is that profiteers will lie about how new that product is.They usually deceive
people
 about it.
As a result
,
people
 might buy different old things at the price of new ones. To conclude, all the companies are looking for more income and it's a constructive way for gaining much more profits.
However
, it has several disadvantages for purchasers.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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