Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at Persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people in including me would argue that advertisements completely encourage them to buy stuff. They maintain that it's really helpful for making decisions while shopping. As another group of them believe that advertisements cannot attract them because it's so usual. It's a kind of daily thing for them and they won't pay attention to it anymore.
Advertisement plays a fundamental role in people's way of shopping. It's really helpful when they want to choose their favourite product. Whereas they are completely aware of it, They might feel so comfortable. They shall know each detail about that.
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, When somebody wants to buy special shoes from advertising on television, they will know about the quality, colour and material. ,Linking Words
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it has some financial benefits for people. They can compare the price of something like a watch between several shops or online markets and find one Add a comma
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I adore shopping from different advertisements particularly from those which advertise on social media like Add a comma
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so viewers couldn't stand it anymore and after that nobody bought from them.
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