In their adevertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative developement?

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Is it important advertising has an effect on people's choices? Nowadays we are bombarded by an enormous variety of advertisements.

Businesses

and companies usually emphasise that their works or

products

are useful for people's needs.

Firstly

, In point of my view, advertising is the most important part of each business but when our advertisements are bombarding our goal's society, They will be nervous and anxious about our

products

. So companies and successful

businesses

must be careful about the planning of their advertising. I suppose

that is

negative development that

businesses

usually emphasise to their

products

are new.

Secondly

, progressivism is most important in new business.

However

, companies have straightforward approaches to improve their

products

and increase their sales. Manager of new

businesses

is hired new industrial engineers for improving their advertising and make a program to improve the level of their quality. To conclude that essay, I have to say when managers want to be a success in the future, They can receive their consumer's responses about their advertisement and a new way of advertising.

Finally

, they can change their advertising system to increase their sale and be effective on their costumer's minds.

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In their adevertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative developement?

Fully explain your ideas

We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say that holding sport competitions cause many troubles, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or oragnisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Some people believe that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.