Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money while others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some think that people should be accepted
to
their terrible conditions Change preposition
for
such
as Linking Words
an
unsatisfactory employment and shortage of capital. Others believe that Remove the article
apply
this
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situation
could be developed by Use synonyms
try
. Wrong verb form
trying
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essay Linking Words
dicusses
both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.
On the one hand, some optimistic Correct your spelling
discusses
person
said that should accept the bad condition of Fix the agreement mistake
people
the
public Correct article usage
apply
life
. If a person Use synonyms
not
Add a missing verb
does not
accepts
Wrong verb form
accept
to
their Change preposition
apply
unpleasent
position, he would be affected by mental depression due to they will feel about their Correct your spelling
unpleasant
situation
andUse synonyms
hates
their current Wrong verb form
hate
life
. Use synonyms
For instance
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 60% of the population have killed themselves because Linking Words
of
they did not like Change preposition
apply
to
their financial status and an unsatisfactory Change preposition
apply
of
work. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, the public is being accepted to their status while they live happily.
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On the other hand
, every individual has a right to improve their Linking Words
unpleasent
position like a wealthy lifestyle. Correct your spelling
unpleasant
Hardwork
can lead to improving current status, if a man does not have happy about their job, he would be changed to their now employment because the satisfaction is the most important aspect for everyone's work period. Correct your spelling
Hard work
Foir
instance, Indian people always try to improve their financial condition from underprivileged into the wealthy lifestyle, Correct your spelling
For
their
are working Replace the word
there
regulary
. Correct your spelling
regularly
Hence
, people should be tried to develop their current Linking Words
situation
to Use synonyms
Linking Words
next
level Correct article usage
the next
Use synonyms
life
.
To conclude, not accepting Change preposition
of life
the
real-time Correct article usage
apply
life
, Use synonyms
as a result
, Linking Words
Linking Words
this
can lead to the Correct pronoun usage
apply
folks
are killing themselves and creating mental Use synonyms
presssure
Correct your spelling
pressure
who
Change the pronoun
whom
life
hates Use synonyms
folks
. Use synonyms
Hardwork
and motivation Correct your spelling
Hard work
has
to develop the Change the verb form
have
folks
capital position and Use synonyms
creating
the satisfaction of job so they should be tried often. In my opinion, about Wrong verb form
create
this
, each and every Linking Words
Use synonyms
folks
should be improved their today's Change to a singular noun
folk
situation
into a good and better lifestyle.Use synonyms
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