The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the university

sports

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courts from 1990 until now.

Overall

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, the comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from

sports

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fields with

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apply

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few facilities to well-equipped ones. In the year 1990,

this

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sports

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field had a much greener area with a great park, but during the

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year’s

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, the courts saw a significant change. The most noticeable is that all of the trees in the northwest of the university were chopped down, with the car park in the southwest being demolished to make way for

basketball

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the basketball

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court and tennis court respectively.

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, these areas have detached from other facilities currently.

In contrast

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, the café and reception in the centre of the map remained. The former tennis court was cleared and converted

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into

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a fitness centre in the

north-western

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northwestern

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corner of the

sports

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courts.

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developments were the extension of changing room which was relocated to the top of the fitness centre and

turning

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the turning

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the

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of the

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outdoor pool into an indoor one.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Layout alterations
Refurbished
Demolished
Erected
Renovated
Sports facilities
Tennis courts
Basketball courts
Football fields
Athletics track
Encroachment
Accessibility
Landscaping
Infrastructure
Spatial arrangement
Ample space
Congested
Upgrade
Downgrade
Amenity
Displacement

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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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