The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. 🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

🔸Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the university
sports
courts from 1990 until now.
Overall
, the comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from
sports
fields with
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few facilities to well-equipped ones. In the year 1990,
this
sports
field had a much greener area with a great park, but during the
next
year’s
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, the courts saw a significant change. The most noticeable is that all of the trees in the northwest of the university were chopped down, with the car park in the southwest being demolished to make way for
basketball
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court and tennis court respectively.
Moreover
, these areas have detached from other facilities currently.
In contrast
, the café and reception in the centre of the map remained. The former tennis court was cleared and converted
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a fitness centre in the
north-western
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corner of the
sports
courts.
Further
developments were the extension of changing room which was relocated to the top of the fitness centre and
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the
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outdoor pool into an indoor one.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Layout alterations
  • Refurbished
  • Demolished
  • Erected
  • Renovated
  • Sports facilities
  • Tennis courts
  • Basketball courts
  • Football fields
  • Athletics track
  • Encroachment
  • Accessibility
  • Landscaping
  • Infrastructure
  • Spatial arrangement
  • Ample space
  • Congested
  • Upgrade
  • Downgrade
  • Amenity
  • Displacement
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