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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university . what arethe advantages and disadvantages of this?

#year #school #university #arethe
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 the educational
systems
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 in the world
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 12 years.
However
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 it is similar
with
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foreigner
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 educational systems but is a long
time
. Some believe that the educational period is 12 years. But from my perspective, I agree that it is a very long period because it
waste
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 a part of
student's
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life
. The following paragraph will be discussing my disagreement.
Therefore
, the conclusion has been reached.
To begin
 with, as the previous paragraph has been said that the students pass their
life
 in
school
 around 8 hours per day and they
dont
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don't
 learn how to behave with people and problems out of
school
. They just do
homeworks
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homework
, learn sciences theoretically and in
less
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 cases practically.
Firstly
, they need to learn
life
 principles
such
 as ethical norms and moral principles but the teaching staff explain them theoretically and it is not enough for
student
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the student
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.
Secondly
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 the long
time
 of
school
 make him tired and may bring some hate and disgust.
Lastly
, the students go to
school
 5 to 6 days per week and in some
countries
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 they
dont
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don't
 learn any
basical
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basic
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topics
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topis
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topics
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such
 as sexual
relationship
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relationships
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 and in
fact
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 they
dont
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don't
 be powerful as they need.
Moreover
, I believe it is better to have a year off between finishing
school
 and going to university. Due to
latter
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the latter
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sentence
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 the
school
time
 is long and it is better to less the
school
time
 for one year or one day per week to prepare students for
life
's examination.
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