Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you Write at least 150 words.

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Dear SBS Gang, Hope you all are doing well! I wholeheartedly thank you all for the arrangements that you guys did for my trip to your place. I had a comfortable stay at your flat and enjoyed everything there. Special thanks for the photos that you people sent me of that trip. I am sorry for replying late as after coming back from the outing, I went to my cousin's wedding and was busy with functions. You fellow know that I love to enjoy functions and ceremonies. I was telling my parents about the travel and they insisted to invite you all to come to my city. It has a plethora of places to visit.

Moreover

, we have a separate portion which is only for guests where you guys can stay. My birthday is exactly after 3 months on 14/05/2022 and I am expecting you all to join us and celebrate. It will be great fun. I will wait for you all. Lots of love Jatin Kochar

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

167 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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