Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and the holiday explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you Write at least 150 words.

Dear SBS Gang, Hope you all are doing well! I wholeheartedly thank you all for the arrangements that you guys did for my trip to your place. I had a comfortable stay at your flat and enjoyed everything there. Special thanks for the photos that you people sent me of that trip. I am sorry for replying late as after coming back from the outing, I went to my cousin's wedding and was busy with functions. You fellow know that I love to enjoy functions and ceremonies. I was telling my parents about the travel and they insisted to invite you all to come to my city. It has a plethora of places to visit.
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, we have a separate portion which is only for guests where you guys can stay. My birthday is exactly after 3 months on 14/05/2022 and I am expecting you all to join us and celebrate. It will be great fun. I will wait for you all. Lots of love Jatin Kochar
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