Some people seek a lot of advice from family and friends when choosing their career. Others feel it is better to choose a career more independently. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, some
people
search for advice
during choosing their prospective career. Others, better take a look for their own knowledge. However
, personally, I think that is
better to use your experience and choose a satisfying job. This
essay will emphasize why is better to keep your own point of view, but also
will consider advice
from other people
.
On the one hand, crowds who have their own opinion are usually more successful in life, then
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than
people
who listen to someone guidance. Because, when humans choose their future
workplace, they should regard only their own opinion. For instance
, my friend Oleg usually make a decision independently, but he can also
consider someone else opinion. In fact, he obviously reached success in the IT sphere
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IT-sphere
Hence
, nobody exactly knew what is better for each person. In this
situation is better to have own
point of view, because choosing Correct pronoun usage
your own
such
a future
career considering, might influence on rest of life
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your life
Then
, everybody should definitely choose their own option.
On the other hand
, if the advice
is given from the older person, that has already gone the same way. Then
it will be not unnecessary to follow some advice
. For example
, my uncle Andrew has no idea about his future
career. And he asked his father for guidance, what is better to choose, what is better to leave. His father was like a role model to him, and he has advised Andrew to choose the same way - medicine. After a while, Andrew became second
to none doctor. Thus
, this
story teaches that it is not always unnecessary to listen
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tolisten
advice
from other people
.
To conclude, I believe that before selecting a future
position, humans do it because of their own flavour, no matter what is crowd suggest them
. But each person should Change preposition
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also
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