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In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people their own marriage partner. Discuss and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, some
parents
 always arrange their
children
’s marriage, while some people believe
children
 should select their
couples
with
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by
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 themselves. Both of these views will be discussed in the following paragraph.
To begin
with
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 weddings
that
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apply
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arranged
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are arranged
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 by
parents
, controlled marriage partners usually appear in elite society.
Fiance
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The fiance
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 that was selected must be the best person for their
children
 and mostly two of their
parents
 are acquaintances with each other. These reasons will ensure that their kids'
life
 after the wedding will be pleasant and unproblem.
Moreover
, some
parents
 will receive commercial advantages from the wedding.
For instance
, most of the main characters in the movies have arranged marriages because their
parents
 require money to extend their business.
On the other hand
, there are some arguments that choosing their own
couples
 is the best way for their future
life
. The majority of
children
 like to have independence for selecting their lovers. Own selected
couples
 will be the people that they are in love with and feel comfortable
to stay
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 with them. These feelings will make both of them live together for a long period. From my perspective, the own selected marriage outweighs the partners that are arranged by
parents
. After the wedding, their babies will be
borned
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born
 and they must look after them until they grow up. If their marriage’s
life
 is unpleasant or the worst issue is they divorce, their
children
 will have problems.
This
 example will support that
children
 should select their own
couples
 for their perfect family lives in the future. In conclusion, I am convinced that a happy marriage’s
life
 is better for the
children
 and their future baby than the benefits from their arranged marriages.
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  • Marital satisfaction
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  • Family dynamics
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  • Emotional bonds
  • Societal pressures
  • Traditions
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