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The holiday accommodation chosen by the Britain in 2010

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The given bar chart illustrates the information about choosing holiday accommodation of 4 various countries in the UK in 2010. The general overview here is the hotel was the majority holiday accommodation chosen by Britain. According to the chart,it is clear that Neither of the four countries chose much of the hotel which accounted for over 50% of choosing in England and Scotland but under 50% in Wales and Northern
Ireland
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, approximately 27
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to30% were chosen by England,Scotland and Wales on the Self-careering Which were moderately more than Northern
Ireland
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 which choose only 12% of its.
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, Northern
Ireland
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 had the highest figure of the Caravan among the four nations, with about 30%, higher than the figure of the other three countries by roughly 20%.
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, England,Wales and Northern
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 shared a similar figure of above 10% of the camping,whereas Scotland indicated the number of just 5% during the observed year.
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