Violence in the media promotes violence in the society. To what extent do you agree?
Entertainment, as well as informative media, is nowadays held responsible for spreading violence-related action in society. I completely agree with the aforesaid notion. In
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essay, I will discuss in the Linking Words
first
paragraph, how widespread global rampage results from online media and in the Linking Words
second
paragraph, how the Linking Words
television
industry is responsible for domestic unlawful exercise.
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Firstly
, on the international platform, easy accessibility of unsupervised content and communication through various online applications are the leading causes of illegal patterns of behaviour. Linking Words
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, communities across the globe are nowadays making contact with citizens of different nations and generally, most Linking Words
people
use fake identity to trap vulnerable young minds into unethical Use synonyms
activities
in society. As these kinds of applications are totally unmonitored, it's easy for them to violate the rules and regulations and set a base for terrorist Use synonyms
activities
for their own benefit. Use synonyms
For instance
, the "Dark Web", which is the web portal in which Linking Words
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meet and discuss planned criminal Use synonyms
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an abyss that no government authority is still able to trace out its details. Another clear examples of those are the applications like Facebook and what's up, few Linking Words
people
ignite controversial issues like caste, gender equality and make many individuals be rebellious against their own protectors.
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Secondly
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television
programmes, especially daily soaps generally have contents that initiate disturbing Use synonyms
activities
in families giving rise to domestic violence. Use synonyms
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television
serials are incredibly popular because the focus on presentability and fiction attracts the human mind and Use synonyms
people
become handicapped to identify the remote possible reality and get overwhelmed with villainous activity leads them to imitate those kinds of behaviour in their daily family as well as social life. To illustrate, there is a popular crime fiction serial called ' Savdhan India" on Sony TV and all age group of Use synonyms
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prefer to watch it. Use synonyms
However
, in my town, one man named Mr Karan, killed his wife exactly in a similar manner as shown in one of the episodes of 'Savdhan India'. The reason behind his unlawful act was Linking Words
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the same as shown in the serial Linking Words
that is
suspected of adultery. That's why it is obvious thatLinking Words
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media should be absolutely blamed for rising violence in society.
In conclusion, illegal criminal Remove the comma
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activities
are primarily the results of Use synonyms
television
and online content. In my opinion, it is true because the easy availability of unethical content, which is absolutely not supervised creates a significantly bad impact on peoples Use synonyms
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consequently
leading to the spread of violence.Linking Words
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