In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether it is wise to consume the
information
using paper-based products and television or
people
should find news via the
internet
on websites using personal
computers
or mobile
phones
. In
this
essay, I am going to examine
this
issue from both points of view and
then
explain why I believe that
people
should find the golden balance between traditional and modern news sources. Nowadays, the penetration level of the
internet
and smart mobile gadgets is dramatically increasing globally.
Additionally
, the
internet
is the only gate for an almost unlimited amount of new
information
where
people
could get access in a more convenient way than using newspapers or television.
Moreover
, the main feature of the
internet
is the speed and the spreading rate.
For example
, if somebody makes a post on Twitter with emergency news, every subscriber can get
this
up-to-date
information
almost instantaneously. Despite the fact that the
internet
on mobile
phones
and
computers
is the convenient way to be in touch with the world, it has some drawbacks. The way that
people
use their
phones
and
computers
could be a reason
of
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eyes
health issues.
For instance
, the distance between screen and
eyes
in many cases does not exceed 30
centimeters
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, so
this
distance and the light could damage the
eyes
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ability to focus on long distances.
That is
why it is crucial to encourage
people
to change the
information
sources to another,
such
as newspapers or TV.
Additionally
,
people
appreciate books because they contain unique
information
or stories that shouldn't be up-to-date, so TV and newspaper companies could reconsider their formats and
information
to attract
new
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and previous
audience
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audiences
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. In conclusion, it stands to reason to highlight that both points have their metrics and, while consuming new
information
on a daily basis,
people
should find the proper balance between using newspapers or TV and using mobile
phones
or
computers
to maintain
eyes
' health on the high level.
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