In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasizes that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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an essential role
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boosting up companies profit margins. There are some individuals who claim that most of the firms highlight their products and services
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promoting . In ,the up company passage, I will discuss
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and cons of
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consumers to choose their good at
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price . For that reason, the business organisation took
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their business using
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method to gain profits.
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been conducted by Economy forum and reported that, those company which choose marketing using famous personalities and
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provides alluring offers to attached customers attention.
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of those companies services
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increased tremendously as well as
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interests
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of drawbacks.
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and foremost, publicising manipulative and hypnotising process which leads people to buy more due to their lucrative offers.
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forum reported that
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folks brought unnecessary
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which
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no use just for alluring promotions.
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, some companies advertise unhealthy products like, cigarettes which have negative effects on human life as well as causes several diseases. To conclude, in my opinion, the advantages of marketing more than
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. It assists to enlarge a nation
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growth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innovation
  • Fast-paced
  • Distinguishing
  • Psychological aspect
  • Inherently
  • Perceived
  • Continuous improvement
  • Revolutionary
  • Feasible
  • Throwaway culture
  • Undervalue
  • Longevity
  • Obscure
  • Novelty
  • Unsatisfactory
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