You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • explain why you would like the job - • give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ • say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Write at least 150 words.

Dear Mr. &
Mrs.
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Wallace, I am writing regarding an advertisement published in an Australian family and kids magazine
last
week. As you are looking for a caregiver to take care of your kid and live with you for
a
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short term, I believe that I am suitable for
this
role.
Therefore
, I would like to apply for
this
job, and I would appreciate
if
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you could consider my application and CV. I, Jenny Chen, am currently working at the ACC kindergarten in Bangkok, Thailand. I have seven years of experience in looking after children under nine years old.
However
, I plan to study
in
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education for early childhood in Australia
next
year.
Thus
, I would like to prepare myself and learn more about
Australia
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culture before the semester starts.
Moreover
, I love taking of children and have high energy to play with them all day. On top of that, I have the most valuable qualities which are necessary for
this
role, including honesty, reliability, and
compassionate
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. As I mentioned above, I am pursuing my
further
education in Master of Education for early childhood.
Hence
, in my pastime, I will prepare myself to study and join the communities to gain more local experience in the land
of
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down under. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you. Sincerely, Jenny Chen
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
  • Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
  • Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
  • Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
  • Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
  • Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment
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